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Tuesday, March 13, 2012

My Poetry Piece 1! (Categories)

Life can be hard,
but live till the full extent.
It may be a dream,
for what it may seem.
Love is good and bad,
but when you fight it's sad.
It could make you love sick,
or just plain sick.
Hope is when you stand up,
don't stand down that means you've lost.
You feel like helping the world,
but the world does not need none.
Freedom is beyond reach,
but you need to see the real world.
All there is, is chaos and suffering,
Need to say you will get hurt.
Courage comes within your soul,
GOD will help with that.
They say you can't do it,
but you can.
Poetry is your emotion,
and you standing ovation.
It lets you be who you are,
and let's you be not who you are.
Music is our personal vacation,
until there will be some evacuation.
It also lets you be yourself,
but in a different way of letting everything go.
Words are tough and hurtful,
but at some point you brush it off.
You need to ignore it,
not take it.
Me when I say this,
it means that this is me.
Not what they want me to,
cause I am Me.

From the day you held me in your arms,
You said don't worry and don't be alarmed.
I thought you said it was easy,
I thought you said it was fine,
and I now this life is now mine.
I pray every night,
asking GOD to give me might.
I also ask for him to give you strength,
even though you and life are at different length.
If you die I don't know what I will do,
all I know is that I won't have you.
This is all I say,
I wish you were by me every day.

7 comments:

  1. Well, that was deep. You sure that was from you? Were you drunk? Was it a flash of brilliance?

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  2. Wow, I like how you have such a strong grasp on the intangible....things like words, love, emotions. This isn't easy for people to define understand through writing, but you do an amazing job of it. Great poem, and thanks for sharing it at our open mic!

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  3. I love it Christian!! Amazing! :)

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  4. this is ready good i love this you did a great job!! keep up the good work

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  5. iThink this was your best post ever

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  6. Thank You!!!! Everyone and thank you especially Mr.Fulton!!!!!!!!!!!

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